Writing Story
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Today we had to use all of the language features for our story's. We also had to add senses like smelling, hearing and etc. We were writing a story about a birthday photo.We also had to write in present tense and first person. My story is called : A Repeated Dream
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A Repeated Dream
I am just drinking my warm, sweet coffee. I realised there was a special birthday party at 9 : 00 and it is 10 : 59. I immediately stood up and ran to my room took my clothes dressed up, brushed my teeth and I ran to the party immediately. I am so exhausted I felt like I am gonna faint. The party was couple miles away.
I finally reached the party. I am so relieved that I made it.
My friend asked me, “ Why are you so late? “
I responded “ I forgot about the party. “
My friend found out that I was really tired so he said “ You should drink some warm coffee.”
I told my friend that I already drank warm sweet coffee.
He said “ Okay. Just ask me when need something.”
I looked around the party.
The party is so colourful just like a rainbow. Something felt off, people were acting strange. Still I am desperate for the delicious, creamy cake. I bolted to the cake I tried to eat it. I am confused, the cake disappeared. It felt like I was in a dream.I woke up.
It is just a dream but I realised there was a special birthday party at 9 : 00 and it is 10 : 59. I immediately stand up and ran to my room took my clothes dressed up, brushed my teeth and I ran to the party immediately. I am so tired I felt like I was gonna faint. After that I realised that I am in a loop.
I hope you enjoyed. Thank you for reading my story. Bye! :D
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