Hello fellow readers,
I will be showing you how to do a really strong narrative. A strong narrative has descriptive words, making it believable and consistent.We can describe settings and characters. We also had to change some boring sentences into a descriptive and fun sentences. I haven't finished my story I am still working on it.
Here is the image that we are writing a story about
Here is my story
Mary was a lonesome person. She liked to talk to herself in her cold tiny room, people didn’t really like her, some people say she was quite deranged probably because she always talks to herself. She had dark black long hair and dark black eyes.
Mary was walking down a quiet street then she bumped into a little blonde hair girl.
The little girl asked “ Would you like a mirror. “
Mary got a little suspicious and asked “ Why? “
Little girl pointed out “ This mirror is now useless to me, so that's why I'm trying to sell it.
Mary accepted the offer from the little girl. The little girl slowly faded away. Mary was shocked and confused. Then she suddenly woke up from her sleep.
She thought it was just a dream then she saw the little girl but the little girl started to fade away again. She shakes her head; she probably thinks that just her imagination. Mary heard a blood curdling scream from her cold attic. Mary bolted to the attic...
I hoped you liked my story. Stay safe. Goodbye! OwO
I am looking forward to reading more of your story Rye.
ReplyDeleteYour words gave me a picture in my head.If I was Mary,I'd be taking someone into the attic with me....I wonder what is up there.Lots of spider webs.Thick dust.
Keep up the great work.