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Friday, March 8, 2019

100 Word Count Stories

Hello guys my name is Rye. So me and my class were doing a challenge. The challenge was the 100 word count stories. Here are my newest ones.
Week 3  
The teddy bear
There was a kid name Alex walking in a street to a sleepover.  in his bag in there were a toy cars paper pencils and a teddy bear. The bag was opened Alex didn’t notice that one of his stuff fell most likely the teddy bear. When they got home from the sleepover Alex was crying in his room mum came in and said.
“Don’t worry Alex we will buy you a new one.”
Alex scream”but that teddy bear is special.”
Mum said “calm down.”
Then mum left the room she was gonna buy another teddy bear for Alex.


Week 4 …...The vinegar was too sharp…
James was about to taste vinegar for first time. When ate it he explained what it tasted like. He explained.
“The vinegar was too sharp!”
I said “wow, is it that sharp?”
I didn’t know it was that sour. He went to the bathroom barfed it.
I asked him “did you barf in there!”
James said”Yes!.”
I close my nose and looked in there it was disgusting. I kinda want to try the vinegar. Ive tasted the vinegar before it wasn’t that sour. I decided to taste it taste once again it was very very sour i wasn’t gonna barf


2 comments:

  1. Hi Rye it is Michaela here I like your blog post you have done. I like that you done when somebody is talking you did another line. When I was reading it I had to scrolled to the side but it is a good blog post.

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    1. Thank you for commenting on my blog I really appreciate it. Which story you like the most?.

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