Language Feature
Hello fellow viewers,
This week we were learning about metaphor. Metaphor is saying something that is something else. We had to write a story with language features, it has to have 2 metaphors and 3 paragraphs. My story is about a group friends that want to go to a sleepover but they kept hearing sounds around the house but ignored it.
Here is my story
Chapter 1 Meeting My Friends
I raced to meet my friends. I was so excited about meeting my friend that I was going to explode.
My friend Draco was also thrilled about it and exclaimed ”I am so excited that I am going to run around the whole entire world!¨
Me and my friends ran to Draco´s house to hangout. Funneh, the leader of the group, heard a click near Draco´s house and went to see what it was. Rainbow the food lover said “ What * crunch * is it * crunch * Funneh?¨ While eating chips. Funneh heard a crunch from a bush she thought was not Rainbow crunching on her chips, cause she already finished it…
Chapter 2 Sounds From The Outside...
Funneh turned to a tomato head. She was so embarrassed it was just a rabbit.
Gold facepalmed and said “ Really Funneh . You look like you are about to explode from embarrassment. ¨
Draco was coming to the situation and said “ What is happening! ¨
Rainbow said they heard a crunch nearby but It wasn´t me. Lunar heard another crunch but in another bush and ignored it.
They ignored it and just went to Draco´s house. Draco´s house was big as the moon. They went to Draco´s room to have a sleepover. They put down some beds, there were some rustles from the outside. They still didn't bother to look out the window. All of them went to their beds and slept but someone's phone kept telling them to wake up.
Chapter 3 Scream Then Run...
Something was wrong, it sounded like a scream. Once Funneh woke up she heard a blood curdling scream, Funneh ran to the screaming, she saw Rainbow, Draco, Gold and Lunar running around all because there was dark red blood puddle on the ground. Lunar was calling the police about the blood. The blood appeared out of nowhere... To be continued or not...
I hope you enjoyed my story. Thank you for reading my story. Bye!!! :D
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