I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Rye! Lovely job on getting your writing up. I love how you have put the image in here so that everyone who reads your description understands what you are talking about. Next step: After your introduction write the body of your blog post explaining what you needed to do and have done. Great use of specific vocabulary ( insane, psychopath). This is the sign of a strong writer.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Kia ora Rye!
ReplyDeleteLovely job on getting your writing up. I love how you have put the image in here so that everyone who reads your description understands what you are talking about. Next step: After your introduction write the body of your blog post explaining what you needed to do and have done. Great use of specific vocabulary ( insane, psychopath). This is the sign of a strong writer.
Kia ora Miss D. Thank you for commenting on my blog post. I will try explain what I have to do. Bye!
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