In Room 7 we were doing a challenge that, is 100 word count stories. here's mine.
It was my chance to show my true talent. My confidence went sky high. It was completely out of tune. When i got on that stage everyone cheered on i started to do my talent I did my personal best. When i got off the stage everyone charged over to me, Everyone took a photo. after that disaster i went out the concert. Then i won the talent show my parents was thrilled that I won. I went onto the internet and i have large amount of mail. I was surprised and happy. I practiced my talent for the next show.
I like your 100 word story it was an interesting story that you wrote really like it. I like the word thrilled, it is a word that i didn't know about, good word Rye. Next time you could use some other word. Did it take you a while or did it take you one day?
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