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Thursday, June 14, 2018

Eagles Can Fly

Hello welcome to my blog.

I wrote a poem is called Eagles Can Fly.
I had some free writing time. I like the part owls can seek and people can try.
I feel great about this poem.  I really enjoy it.

Eagles can fly

Monkeys can climb
Crickets can leap
Horses can race
Owls can seek
Cheetahs can run
Eagles can fly
People can try
But that’s about it


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5 comments:

  1. TashSeptember 19, 2018 at 11:59 AM

    Hello Rye. What a good poem you have written. I really like some of the adjectives that you have used. You are very creative Rye, well done.
    Tash

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    1. AnonymousMarch 8, 2019 at 11:07 AM

      Thank you Tash for supporting me. what words do you think i could use improve my writing?.

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    2. TashMarch 11, 2019 at 2:26 PM

      Hello Rye
      Thank you for your response. I wonder if you can discover any new adjectives that you have not used before? Perhaps in another poem.
      I look forward to hearing back from you.
      Tash

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  2. AnonymousMarch 29, 2019 at 9:42 AM

    Hi Rye,i really like this poem.My favorite part was were it said"Eagles can fly
    People can try"Next time you should make it rim more.Did you have fun making this?how did you come up with this?did you like doing this?

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  3. AnonymousNovember 25, 2019 at 9:59 AM

    Hello this Rye from 2019. Your on my oldest blog.

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