Writing Story
Hello fellow viewers,
This Monday we had to a write story for EasTTle. We had to write about an image. It is about a water park. In our story we have to use all we know about writing a story like language features, punctuation and etc. There were questions like who do you see or what do you see. The questions help you with your story.
Here is the image

Here is my story
I am in the warm, clear water. I realised there is a huge colourful loud crowd near the big yellow slide. Maybe they are waiting for something, who knows. The sun is a boiling hot ball. The sun shined on me and it felt like I was gonna melt. I decided to go to a colder pool because it is boiling hot. I quickly walked to a colder pool. I hope I don’t melt to death on my way. The smell is really bad from the chlorine.
When I got to the colder, blue pool it felt like heaven. I see a lifeguard in the distance. I could tell that is a lifeguard from the red clothes. He looked worried.
He yelled out, “ GET OFF THERE. IT IS NOT SAFE!”
I thought get off where? I am so confused.
He yelled again, “ GET OFF NOW!”
Then I heard a big splash. I quickly looked up and saw people diving off a really tall diving board. From my point of view It looked like it was as tall as the Eiffel Tower. So that's why the lifeguard was so worried
I am just thinking about, why did they put that there, why is it so tall and why did they even allow this. Well it’s not my business. I couldn't care less. When they got out the pool it looked hilarious seeing them come out like that.I didn’t know what to do. It is still boiling hot. If I take a single step outside I am gonna melt from the boiling floor. I can’t get over the hot boiling sun. I am just gonna take a swim around so I wont get bored.
I hope you enjoyed. Thank you for reading my story. Bye! :D